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		<title>A Few Words on Writing Short</title>
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		<dc:creator>Michelle V. Rafter</dc:creator>
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There are no short cuts to writing short.
It&#8217;s hard. It takes practice. Even Mark Twain thought so, as he famously said: “I didn&#8217;t have time to write a short letter, so I wrote a long one instead.”
There are, however, a few good reasons to try:
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<p><font color="#000000">There are no short cu</font><font color="#000000">ts </font><font color="#000000">to writing short.</font></p>
<p><font color="#000000">It&#8217;s hard. It takes practice. Even <a href="http://www.famousquotes.com/search.php?search=1&amp;FirstName=Mark&amp;LastName=Twain&amp;field=FullName">Mark Twain</a> thought so, as he famously said: “I didn&#8217;t have time to write a short letter, so I wrote a long one instead.”</font></p>
<p><font color="#000000"><font color="#000000">There are, however, a few good reasons to try:</font></font></p>
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<li><font color="#000000"><b>FOB</b> &#8211; A magazine&#8217;s &#8220;front of the book&#8221; departments are the first place freelance writers are advised to pitch at a publication they&#8217;ve never worked with before. FOB stories are generally short.</font></li>
<li><font color="#000000"><b>Story packages</b> &#8211; <a href="http://www.usatoday.com/">USA Today</a> popularized this non-linear storytelling technique of breaking information into multiple parts consisting of a short main story, sidebars and graphics. The concept was adopted by papers everywhere and has risen to new heights online.</font></li>
<li><font color="#000000"><b>The Web</b> &#8211; Stories written for the Web are shorter to match online readers&#8217; short attention spans. Writers need to write accordingly.</font></li>
<li><font color="#000000"><b>Blogs</b> &#8211; Some of the best blogs have pithy, short posts that pack a lot into a small space. A good example is viral marketing guru Seth Goldin&#8217;s blog post on <a href="http://sethgodin.typepad.com/seths_blog/2006/06/how_to_get_traf.html">how to drive traffic to your blog</a>. It&#8217;s one giant, hilarious list, clocking in at 575 words. Bonus: master the short blog post and it&#8217;ll help your other writing (see above).</font></li>
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<p><font color="#000000"><font color="#000000">Writers take different approaches to writing short. When I posed the question &#8220;How do you write short?&#8221; on the <a href="http://www.linkedin.com/answers?categoryHome=&amp;category=MAR_WED">Writing and Editing</a> section of the <a href="http://www.linkedin.com">LinkedIn</a> Answer board last week, <a href="http://www.linkedin.com/answers/marketing-sales/writing-editing/MAR_WED/184951-15902317?browseIdx=0&amp;sik=1205495638620&amp;goback=%2Eamq">more than 50 writers weighed in</a>. The advice was all over the map. It basically boiled down to a few approaches:</font></font></p>
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<li><font color="#000000"><b>The Haiku Method</b> &#8211; Choose words carefully and use as few as possible.</font></li>
<li><font color="#000000"><b>The Diarrhea Method</b> &#8211; Pour it all out then trim judiciously.</font></li>
<li><font color="#000000"><b>The Newshound Method</b> &#8211; Follow the classic inverted pyramid structure, covering who, what, where, when, why and how, in descending order of importance until you run out of space.</font></li>
<li><font color="#000000"><b>The Lists Method</b> &#8211; Use lists, bullets and other devices to summarize material. This is a favorite of Web editors and writers because the result is dense, meaty stories that cover a lot of ground in a short time.</font></li>
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<p><font color="#000000"><font color="#000000">I write a lot of 500-word stories and I&#8217;ve come up with my own tricks for writing short.</font></font></p>
<p><font color="#000000"><font color="#000000"><b>Plan</b>. Start thinking about a story&#8217;s length and structure when you craft a query letter or get an assignment. If you&#8217;ve got an idea of what material you need and how you&#8217;ll present it, you can structure interviews and research accordingly, and in the process, eliminate unnecessary work. </font></font></p>
<p><font color="#000000"><font color="#000000"><b>Structure.</b> Tailor a story&#8217;s structure to its size. Save the three-paragraph anecdotal opening for another time. For a short story you need a snappy lead, a nut graph up high to tell readers what it&#8217;s about and why they should care, all the relevant details and a short conclusion.</font></font></p>
<p><font color="#000000"><font color="#000000"><b>Edit yourself.</b> When you&#8217;re finished, go over a story once, twice, three times to cut  excess baggage. Read it out loud to spot clumsy passages that could be more succinct. When in doubt, leave it out.</font></font></p>
<p><font color="#000000"><font color="#000000"><b>Use a word counter</b>.</font></font></p>
<p><font color="#000000"><font color="#000000">And that&#8217;s exactly 500 words on writing short.</font></font></p>
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